What are some red flags that might make you hesitant to be friend someone?

2024-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jenna

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The attitude is very important for me to be my friend. Be considerate and kind to each other. Not curse, but use beautiful words. I believe it\'s a small part, but it\'s significant in a relationship. And also I like person who is polite to others and has somethings that I can learn.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! That\'s a thoughtful perspective! I completely agree that kindness, respect, and a wil[이름]gness to learn from one another are essential for building strong friendships. Keep valuing those qualities!
~T. Jenna

The attitude is very important for me to be my friend. 
>>Attitude is very important for me to be friends with someone.
OR
>>Having a positive attitude is very important for me in forming friendships.
Be considerate and kind to each other. Not curse, but use beautiful words. 
>>Be considerate and kind to each other. Don’t curse; instead, use beautiful words.
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>>Demonstrate consideration and kindness toward one another. Refrain from using profanity; rather, opt for eloquent and uplifting language.
I believe it\'s a small part, but it\'s significant in a relationship. 
Correct, or
>>I believe it may seem like a small piece of the puzzle, but it plays a pivotal role in any relationship.
And also I like person who is polite to others and has somethings that I can learn.
>>I also like people who are polite to others and have qualities that I can learn from.

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