What are some special customs or traditions in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
We have a special traditional game called janggi. This game is played by two players. Each player has his or her army. And they control them by moving them in the board.
강사 첨삭
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We have a special traditional game called janggi.
>> correct~~
This game is played by two players.
>> or:: At least two players can play this game.
Each player has his or her army.
>> correct~~
And they control them by moving them in the board.
>> And they can control them or the pieces by moving them on the board.
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