What are some things about the eating habits you want to change?
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I want to change my eating habit that I eat snacks when I\'m not hungry. I like snacks and chocolates but they are not good for my health so I have to reduce eating them. But, even after I have meals and I\'m full enough, it is hard to control eating snacks. Moreover, I really need to start less eating them than before I used to do because I ate a lot of snacks these days and didn\'t exercise.
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~ Teacher Tricia
I want to change my eating habit that I eat snacks when I\'m not hungry.
>> The eating habit that I want to change is snacking even if I\'m not hungry.
I like snacks and chocolates but they are not good for my health so I have to reduce eating them.
>> CORRECT!
But, even after I have meals and I\'m full enough, it is hard to control eating snacks.
>> CORRECT!
Moreover, I really need to start less eating them than before I used to do because I ate a lot of snacks these days and didn\'t exercise.
>> Moreover, I really need to start eating less than before because I had too many snacks these days and didn\'t exercise.
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