What are some things about your eating habits you want to change?
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I want to change my eating habit after swimming. Nowadays, I started swimming, but It takes lots of calroies, after swimming I usually feel super tired, and I really want to eat something.
Eating sonething after exercising is not good for health and If I really eat, it becames my fat again.
Yesterday, I didn\'t eat anything after swimming, but It was too hungry. What should I do? Watching eathing show in Youtube also makes me much hungrier.
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Hi [이름] Su!
Thank you for writing your composition! ^^
I agree with you, exercise, particularly swimming, makes you hungry. I think you should consider eating a little bit rather than just watching videos on YouTube. Kkkkk. See you later~ :D
-T.Jhozel
I want to change my eating habit after swimming.
>> Correct.
Nowadays, I started swimming, but It takes lots of calroies, after swimming I usually feel super tired, and I really want to eat something.
>>Nowadays, I\'ve started swimming, but it burns a lot of calories, and after swimming, I\'m usually exhausted and hungry.
Eating sonething after exercising is not good for health and If I really eat, it becames my fat again.
>>Eating something after exercising is not good for your health, and if I really eat, I will become fat again.
Yesterday, I didn\'t eat anything after swimming, but It was too hungry.
>> Correct
What should I do?
>> Correct
Watching eathing show in Youtube also makes me much hungrier.
>> Watching a cooking show on YouTube also makes me much hungrier.
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