What are some things about your eating habits you want to change?

Good afternoon and happy Friday Sir [이름]!

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I am excited to hear your stories about the event. Hihihihi.

Oh my god! We are the same. I eat a lot at one o\'clock in the morning before going to bed.

I usually feel hungry at midnight. Hihihi. That\'s why I am so fat, hahaha

Anyway, you are right. We should limit our intake of sweets.
It is difficult to have Diabetes Mellitus.

It is also associated with other diseases. We should really take good care of your health.

Thank for your magnificent composition. Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina

I love to eat sweet foods such as snacks, ice creams, sweet bread, cakes, and even sweet fruits.

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>> OR: I love to eat sweet foods such as fruits, ice creams, bread, cakes and so on.

>> OR: I like all kinds of sweet foods.

I do not like fruits that are sour.

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So I prefer pears to apples or grapes.

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For drinking, I like rice-wine rather than Soju, whisky, or cognac because they taste bitter.

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>> OR: When I drink, I like rice-wine rather than Soju, Whisky or Cognac because they have a bitter taste.

I might be addicted to sweets.

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We eat rice every day and it also contains a large amount of sugar together with carbohydrate.

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Eating sweets is usually associated with the risk of diabetes.

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>> OR: Eating sweets often is usually associated with the risk of having Diabetes Mellitus.

The high sugar level in the blood can make the size of brain to shrink as well.

>> High sugar level in the blood can make the size of the brain to shrink as well.

>> OR: High blood sugar can make the size of the brain to shrink.

>> OR: High glucose level in the blood might make the size of the brain shrink.

The higher the blood sugar level, the higher the risk of depreciation.

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Many people eat sweet when they are stressed, but it actually won’t be helpful at all.

>> Many people eat sweet when they are stressed, but actually it isn\'t helpful at all.

>> Many people eat sweet when they are stressed, but it doesn\'t change anything at all.

It is so important that we have to refrain ourselves from eating too much sweets.

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If necessary, we need to check our blood sugar level regularly at least once a year.

>> If necessary, we need to check our blood sugar level regularly or at least once a year.

In addition, I want to change my habit that I tend to eat a lot before going to bed, which is detrimental to my health.

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