What are some things in your hometown that are part of history?
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Good morning, [이름]nah!
I would love to visit your hometown one day. I hope to visit also my cousin who lives in Incheon.
I need to save money in order to do that.
Please read, understand and practice the corrections I\'m giving you.
T[이름]k you for answering your homework well.
- Teacher Shelly-
I was born in Kang neung that out side in Seoul.
>>> I was born in Kang Neung outside Seoul.
There are many beautiful mountains and clean blue color ocean that sand are white.
>>> There are many beautiful mountains and clean blue colored ocean the sand is white.
It’s famous tourist attractions in the summer.
>>> It\'s a famous tourist attraction in summer.
When I was childhood I spent all summer in my grandma’s house.
>>> When I was a child I spent summer at my grandmother\'s house.
I had a lot of fun in the summer my skin was always almost brown color.
>>> I had a lot of fun during summer, my skin color was almost brown.
passed century one of the famous artist name by Sin sa Im dang was born also as same my hometown.
>>> Years ago, Sin Saimdang, a famous artist was born in my hometown.
Korean money has her face.
>>> You can see her face on our Korean money.
Also one of the her kid was very famous politician and scholar.
>>>She had a child who was a very famous politician and scholar.
She is role model all Korean women.
>>> She is a role model to all Korean women.
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