What are some things people can do to keep healthy?
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I think the best ways to keep healthy are to have a healthy diet and to exercise on a regular basis.
Firstly, health diet has including Fruits, vegetables, vitamins.
non-health diet has including hamberger, chicken It can be lead to obesity.
Secondly, we have to exercise on a regular basis. such as go to the gym, walk to the park.
I think that our bodies need to rest. as well.
If I do drink of water a lot. it can lead to healthy body.
In conclusion, it is combination of both that creat a healthy lifestyle .
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1. I think the best ways to keep healthy are to have a healthy diet and to exercise on a regular basis.
>> CORRECT!
2. Firstly, health diet has including Fruits, vegetables, vitamins.
>> CORRECT!
2. Firstly, health diet has including Fruits, vegetables, vitamins.
>> Firstly, eating fruits and vegetables and taking some vitamins are included in a healthy diet.
3. non-health diet has including hamberger, chicken It can be lead to obesity.
>> Eating hamburger or chicken is unhealthy and it can lead to obesity.
4. Secondly, we have to exercise on a regular basis. such as go to the gym, walk to the park.
4. Secondly, we have to exercise on a regular basis. such as go to the gym, walk to the park.
>> Secondly, we have to exercise on a regular basis, such as going to the gym or walking at the park.
5. I think that our bodies need to rest. as well.
>> CORRECT!
6. If I do drink of water a lot. it can lead to healthy body.
>> If I drink a lot of water, it can lead to a healthy body.
OR: Drinking a lot of water can help me have a healthy body.
7. In conclusion, it is combination of both that creat a healthy lifestyle .
>> In conclusion, it is a combination of both that creates a healthy lifestyle.
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