What are some things that you need to do in emergency situations?
학생이 쓴 원문
In emergency situations, the most important things usually involve staying calm, protecting yourself and others, and getting help quickly.
The exact steps depend on the type of emergency.
Quickly look around to understand what’s happening (fire, accident, injury, natural disaster, etc.).
Move yourself and others away from immediate danger if possible (fire, traffic, collapsing structures).
Dial emergency numbers (like 911 in the U.S. or 119 in Korea) for medical, fire, or police assistance.
Perform CPR or use an AED if someone has no pulse or isn’t breathing.
Stop bleeding with pressure if there are serious wounds.
Follow evacuation routes or safety instructions if you’re in a building, workplace, or public area.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jayjay!
2. The exact steps depend on the type of emergency.
3. Quickly look around to understand what’s happening (fire, accident, injury, natural disaster, etc.).
4. Move yourself and others away from immediate danger if possible (fire, traffic, collapsing structures).
5. Dial emergency numbers (like 911 in the U.S. or 119 in Korea) for medical, fire, or police assistance.
6. Perform CPR or use an AED if someone has no pulse or isn’t breathing.
7. Stop bleeding with pressure if there are serious wounds.
8. Follow evacuation routes or safety instructions if you’re in a building, workplace, or public area.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. In emergency situations, the most important things usually involve staying calm, protecting yourself and others, and getting help quickly.
>>In emergency situations, the most important actions usually include staying calm, protecting yourself and others, and getting help quickly.
2. The exact steps depend on the type of emergency.
>>CORRECT!
3. Quickly look around to understand what’s happening (fire, accident, injury, natural disaster, etc.).
>>Quickly assess the situation to understand what’s happening (e.g., fire, accident, injury, natural disaster).
4. Move yourself and others away from immediate danger if possible (fire, traffic, collapsing structures).
>>If possible, move yourself and others away from immediate danger (e.g., fire, traffic, collapsing structures).
5. Dial emergency numbers (like 911 in the U.S. or 119 in Korea) for medical, fire, or police assistance.
>>Call emergency services (such as 911 in the U.S. or 119 in Korea) for medical, fire, or police assistance.
6. Perform CPR or use an AED if someone has no pulse or isn’t breathing.
>>perform CPR or use an AED If someone is not breathing or has no pulse.
7. Stop bleeding with pressure if there are serious wounds.
>>Stop the bleeding by applying pressure If there are serious wounds.
8. Follow evacuation routes or safety instructions if you’re in a building, workplace, or public area.
>>CORRECT!
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