What are some topics that you can\'t stand to talk about? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
They are about behaviors of youngsters nowadays.
I think they are good and positive, but they sometimes act too rashly.
I think it is because they don\'t know the world yet.
But the world is giving a lot of choices about it to youngsters today.
Because of the reason, it is my topic that I can\'t stand to talk about with others/.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for your efforts for the whole week. See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
I think they are good and positive, but they sometimes act too rashly.
I think they are good and positive, but they sometimes act too rashly.
>>CORRECT!
I think it is because they don\'t know the world yet.
I think it is because they don\'t know the world yet.
>>CORRECT!
But the world is giving a lot of choices about it to youngsters today.
But the world is giving a lot of choices about it to youngsters today.
>>But the world is giving youngsters a lot of choices.
Because of the reason, it is my topic that I can\'t stand to talk about with others.
Because of the reason, it is my topic that I can\'t stand to talk about with others.
>>Because of this reason, it is the topic that I can\'t stand to talk about with others.
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