What are some traditions do you follow on Children’s Day?
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Superb Thursday, Sir [이름]!
Yes those places you\'ve mentioned are popular on Children\'s Day because they are very interactive not only to children, but also for adults. I hope you will be spending your holiday with a bang. All the best for you. See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Eunice
Everybody in Korea gets excited when they look at the calendar and noticed that one of the days is written in red.
>>> Correct!
This means a national holiday in Korea.
>>> This means it\'s a national holiday in Korea.
One of the red days in May is children\'s day.
>>> One of the red dates in May is the Children\'s Day.
As a parents in Korea do not have much time to see their children due to overtime or work on weekend.
>>> Parents in Korea do not have much time to see their children due to overtime work or working even on weekends.
Many families make an extra effort to do something special on children\'s day.
>>> Many families make an extra effort to do something special on Children\'s Day.
Parents will take their children somewhere special and give them a special gift like transforming robot.
>>> Parents will take their children somewhere and give them a special gift like a transforming robot.
The places like amusement parks, zoos, parks are especially popular places for Koreans to take their children on children\'s day.
>>> The places like amusement parks, zoos, playground parks are popular places for Koreans to take their children on Children\'s Day.
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