What are some traditions for Lunar New Year?
학생이 쓴 원문
In South Korea, we should eat “tteokguk”.
At last, we are getting a year older.
We play playing yut and hwatu with our family.
Young people bow for grandparents and old adults and take some pocket money for them.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna! Thank you for sharing about your country\'s tradition every Lunar New Year. I would like to talk with you more about this in class. I will see you then. Have a wonderful day ahead of you.~ T. Lyn
In South Korea, we should eat “tteokguk”.
>>In South Korean, koreans must eat \"tteokguk\" or sticky rice cake soup.
At last, we are getting a year older.
At last, we are getting a year older.
>>I\'m finally one year older and other Koreans are getting a year older too.
We play playing yut and hwatu with our family.
We play playing yut and hwatu with our family.
>>We enjoy playing yutnori and hwatu with our family members.
Young people bow for grandparents and old adults and take some pocket money for them.
Young people bow for grandparents and old adults and take some pocket money for them.
>>Young people bow down to grandparent and old people and get some pocket money from them.
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