What are some traits of teachers?
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My teacher\'s traits are very calm. Because I think my class is very noisy so they always have calm down their students. I think it is very good because I don\'t like always shouting teachers or very noisy teacher.
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Hi, Daisy!
Thank you for your answer. A teacher should always be calm and patient enough to handle their students. ^^
~Teacher Erin
My teacher\'s traits are very calm.
>>CORRECT
Because I think my class is very noisy so they always have calm down their students.
>>Because I think my class is very noisy so they always have calmed down their students.
I think it is very good because I don\'t like always shouting teachers or very noisy teacher.
>>I think it is very good because I don\'t like a teacher that is always shouting and noisy.
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