What are some travel tips to make sure that you will enjoy your vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to search few good restaurants while I\'m traveling. I search for a good place where I want to go. I should have a lot of money.
And If I\'m not alone, I should choose good people whom I feel comfortable traveling. If trouble is happened with people, the traveling will be remained as bad memory.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
4. And If I\'m not alone, I should choose good people whom I feel comfortable traveling.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some items to note:
1. I like to search few good restaurants while I\'m traveling.
>>I like to search for some good restaurants while I\'m traveling.
2. I search for a good place where I want to go.
>>I also search for a good place to go.
3. I should have a lot of money.
>>CORRECT!
4. And If I\'m not alone, I should choose good people whom I feel comfortable traveling.
>>If I\'m not alone, I should choose good people whom I feel comfortable traveling with.
5. If trouble is happened with people, the traveling will be remained as bad memory.
>>If trouble happens to people, then the travel will be a bad memory.
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