What are some unhealthy foods you think are hard to avoid?
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Avoiding unhealthy food is so hard to me.
It\'s because of almost delicious foods are so unhealthy.
Typically, some of the oil is healthy but oil that when using for fry is very unhealthy.
There are too many fat Ingredients. So, It\'s make me fat.
Gaining weight is bad sign for your body. We always keeping proper weight.
I have a promise that meet my boss or friends. Almost people like to eat delicious foods.
Then i have to eat a unhealthy food with them. When i meet my boss, That\'s impossible what i don\'t eat food.
I think It\'s impossible to avoid unhealthy food. So we need a exercise that gain a healthy.
I only like a running at the gym. Sweating is help me more fresh and less my stress. And It\'s effetive for a diet.
Reducing weight is my goal and i have to success it until 2/28.
For my success, I will try to exercise everyday except sunday. Because sunday is gym off.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jun!
Gaining weight is bad sign for your body.
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
Avoiding unhealthy food is so hard to me.
>> Avoiding unhealthy food is so hard for me.
It\'s because of almost delicious foods are so unhealthy.
>> It\'s because almost all delicious foods are so unhealthy.
OR >> It\'s because most delicious foods are so unhealthy.
Typically, some of the oil is healthy but oil that when using for fry is very unhealthy.
>> Typically, some cooking oils are healthy, but oils used for frying are very unhealthy.
There are too many fat Ingredients.
>> CORRECT!
So, It\'s make me fat.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
We always keeping proper weight.
>> We need to always keep our average weight.
I have a promise that meet my boss or friends.
>> I have a promise that I would meet my boss or friends.
Almost people like to eat delicious foods.
>> Most of them like to eat delicious foods.
Then I have to eat a unhealthy food with them.
>> CORRECT!
When I meet my boss, That\'s impossible what i don\'t eat food.
>> When I meet my boss, it\'s impossible not to eat anything.
I think It\'s impossible to avoid unhealthy food.
>> CORRECT!
So we need a exercise that gain a healthy.
>> So we need to exercise to be healthy.
I only like a running at the gym.
>> I only like running at the gym.
Sweating is help me more fresh and less my stress.
>> Sweating helps me feel refreshed and less stressed.
And It\'s effetive for a diet.
>> And It\'s effective for my diet.
Reducing weight is my goal and i have to success it until 2/28.
>> Reducing weight is my goal and I have to succeed until 2/28.
For my success, I will try to exercise everyday except Sunday. Because sunday is gym off.
>> To succeed, I will try to exercise everyday except Sunday, because Sunday is gym off.
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