What are some way you continue improving your English on your own ? give examples and describe how y

2025-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ezra

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As you taught me, I think the best way to improve my English skills is to use English every day. However, Korea is not a country where English is used in everyday life. And I rarely have the opportunity to use English at the company I work for. It\'s embarrassing to say, but when I met foreigners who visited Korea, I would get embarrassed and not be able to say a word. That\'s why I started learning English from a Filipino teacher at Power English. Talking to a Filipino teacher every morning helped somewhat reduce my fear of speaking English. And I am also taking another online English course run by a Korean teacher. Every day, I read the English sentences I learned in that class out loud and record them. Now, I plan to actively approach foreigners who are traveling to Korea and speak to them in English. And I will travel abroad often to increase my opportunities to use English. And I will re-enroll in Power English and learn English again from a Filipino teacher. Thank you again.

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Wow, thank you so much for working hard. Your hard work will blossom in time; just keep watering your knowledge through application. Great composition, Soon ho! Always have a nice day!
~ T. Ezra

As you taught me, I think the best way to improve my English skills is to use English every day.
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Based on your advice, I think using English every day is the best way to get better.
However, Korea is not a country where English is used in everyday life.
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However, English isn\'t commonly spoken in daily life here in Korea.
And I rarely have the opportunity to use English at the company I work for.
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nd I rarely have the chance to use it at work.
It\'s embarrassing to say, but when I met foreigners who visited Korea, I would get embarrassed and not be able to say a word.
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To be honest, I used to freeze up when I met foreigners visiting Korea — I couldn’t say a word.
That\'s why I started learning English from a Filipino teacher at Power English.
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That’s why I started learning English with a Filipino teacher through Power English.
Talking to a Filipino teacher every morning helped somewhat reduce my fear of speaking English.
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Speaking with a Filipino teacher every morning has helped me feel less afraid of using English.
And I am also taking another online English course run by a Korean teacher.
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I’m also taking an online English class with a Korean teacher.
Every day, I read the English sentences I learned in that class out loud and record them.
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In that course, I read English sentences aloud every day and record my voice for practice.
Now, I plan to actively approach foreigners who are traveling to Korea and speak to them in English.
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Now, I plan to actively approach foreign visitors in Korea and try to speak with them in English.
And I will travel abroad often to increase my opportunities to use English.
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I also want to travel abroad more often to increase my chances of using English in real situations.
And I will re-enroll in Power English and learn English again from a Filipino teacher.
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In addition, I’m planning to re-enroll in Power English and continue learning with a Filipino teacher.
Thank you again.
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Thank you again for your support.











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