What are some ways companies contribute to helping society? Explain.
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There are some ways :
First,a company creates lots of jobs and hires employees.
Second , it helps elderly people who live alone,disabled people.
Third, it makes a community to share the social culture
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There are some ways :
>> There are some ways.
First,a company creates lots of jobs and hires employees.
First,a company creates lots of jobs and hires employees.
>> First, a company creates lots of jobs and hires employees.
Second , it helps elderly people who live alone,disabled people.
Second , it helps elderly people who live alone,disabled people.
>> Second , it helps elderly people who live alone and disabled people.
Third, it makes a community to share the social culture
Third, it makes a community to share the social culture
>> Third, it helps a community to share social culture.
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