What are some ways to enjoy the summer vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
It will start so happy that you\'re making an itinerary for the summer vacation. I guess the best ways to enjoy are having time with important people around you. Also, making a memory is an good way too. Especially, strange things that you would try are good ways because new things can make you excited.
강사 첨삭
Fantastic Tuesday to you, Elic! Coming together is a beginning; keeping together is progress; working together is success. Don’t limit yourself, success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day-in and day-out.
It will start so happy that you\'re making an itinerary for the summer vacation.
>>> You should always make an itinerary for summer vacation.
I guess the best ways to enjoy are having time with important people around you.
>>> I guess the best way to enjoy life is to spend time with important people around you.
Also, making a memory is an good way too.
>>> Also, making some good memories is nice too.
Especially, strange things that you would try are good ways because new things can make you excited.
>>> Especially strange things that you would try are good because new things can make you excited.
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