What are some ways to increase the chances of getting promoted within a company?
학생이 쓴 원문
Maintaining good relationship is a good way to increase the chances of getting promoted. The origin of the word \'company\' is sharing bread together. It means that you should do something with someone. You get instructions from upper management, and you should complete them with your team. If you have good skills and maintain good relationships, your teammates will entrust you with major tasks, even if you don\'t feel fully capable. They will lead you.
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Maintaining good relationship is a good way to increase the chances of getting promoted.
>> Maintaining a good relationship is an effective way to increase the chances of getting promoted.
The origin of the word \'company\' is sharing bread together.
>> The origin of the word \'company\' means sharing bread together.
It means that you should do something with someone.
>> It means that you should do something together with someone.
You get instructions from upper management, and you should complete them with your team.
>> You receive instructions from upper management, and you are expected to complete them with your team.
If you have good skills and maintain good relationships, your teammates will entrust you with major tasks, even if you don\'t feel fully capable.
>> If you have good skills and maintain good relationships, your teammates may entrust you with major tasks, even if you don\'t feel fully capable.
They will lead you.
>> CORRECT
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