What are some ways to inspire others to be more compassionate?
학생이 쓴 원문
To inspire people to be compassionate,we should raise up people’s sympathies.start from understanding each others perspective and respect each other’s feelings. So that people can be generous and accept others. So talk and share perspective oftentimes and solve worries together.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this [이름]. Sympathy and compassion are basic human emotions we should practice and prioritize in our daily lives. In that way, the world will be a better place.
To inspire people to be compassionate, we should raise up people’s sympathies.
>>> OR: To inspire people to be compassionate, we should encourage sympathy among people.
Start from understanding each others perspective and respect each other’s feelings.
>>> Start from understanding each others perspective and respecting each other’s feelings.
So that people can be generous and accept others.
>>> correct
>>> OR: In that way, people can be generous and accepting towards others.
So talk and share perspective oftentimes and solve worries together.
>>> correct
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