What are some ways we can help homeless people?
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I donate about 30,000 won to the world vision in every monthes. I know that it isn\'t much money so probably it\'s not a big help for people who needs help. It may sounds weird but it\'s really good to know that I feel good about myself when I do a volunteer work or when I donate some money to who needs my help. I think that I do a donation or a volunteer work are for myself than other people. So in the end, we\'re helping to each other.
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Happy Monday, [이름]!^^
It\'s nice to know about your charity and volunteer work. It will definitely help many people. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Great job!^_^
I donate about 30,000 won to the world vision in every monthes.
>>>I donate about 30,000 won to the World Vision every month.
I know that it isn\'t much money so probably it\'s not a big help for people who needs help.
>>>I know that it isn\'t much money, so probably it\'s not a big help for people who need help.
It may sounds weird but it\'s really good to know that I feel good about myself when I do a volunteer work or when I donate some money to who needs my help.
>>>It may sound weird, but it\'s really good to know that I feel good about myself when I do a volunteer work or when I donate some money to people who need my help.
I think that I do a donation or a volunteer work are for myself than other people.
>>> I think giving a donation or doing a volunteer work is for myself than other people.
So in the end, we\'re helping to each other.
>>>So in the end, we\'re helping each other.
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