What are some ways you know that you can personally keep yourself healthy?
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[이름]nah, t[이름]k you for answering your homework. I think that you are a responsible, organized and a good person inside and out. I want to do the things you do when I get older.
See you later!
-Teacher Shelly-
Everybody have their own habit as you know I got good ways life style.
>>> Everybody has its own habit, as you know I have a good lifestyle. (Even though the following indefinite pronouns may seem to have plural meanings, treat them as singular in formal English: anybody, anyone, each, either, everybody, everyone, everything, neither, none, no one, someone, something.\" In an example, she writes, \"everybody who signed up for the ski trip was taking lessons.\")
First one in the morning when I wake up I drink one spring water bottle.
>>>First thing I do in the morning is drinking a bottle of spring water.
Which is clean my organ systems.
>>> It cleans my internal organs.
Wherever I go always carry water bottle.
>>> I carry a bottle of water wherever I go.
Also when I make rice use brown rice instead white rice.
>>> I cook brown rice instead of white rice.
It is taste not good but my mind always healthy side.
>>> It doesn\'t taste good but I\'m always thinking of my health.
By the way after I eat each meal or snack I use flossing all the time,
>>> I floss every time I finished eating meals or snacks.
That’s why my teeth still pretty healthy.
>>> That\'s why my teeth are still pretty and healthy.
most people they go to the scaling 2times a year.
>>> Most people do scaling twice a year.
I do 3 times a year I spend little extra money but it’s worth for me.
>>> I do it three times a year, I spent extra money but it\'s worth it.
I always watch my eating portion everyday check my weight.
>>> I always watch my eating portion and check my weight every day.
Everyday I do exercise too.
>>> I do exercise everyday too.
I am strong and healthy.
>>> Correct!
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