What are some ways you know that you can personally keep yourself healthy?

2018-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

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Everybody have their own habit as you know I got good ways life style. First one in the morning when I wake up I drink one spring water bottle. Which is clean my organ systems. Wherever I go always carry water bottle. Also when I make rice use brown rice instead white rice. It is taste not good but my mind always healthy side. By the way after I eat each meal or snack I use flossing all the time, That’s why my teeth still pretty healthy.most people they go to the scaling 2times a year. I do 3 times a year I spend little extra money but it’s worth for me. I always watch my eating portion everyday check my weight. Everyday I do exercise too. I am strong and healthy.

강사 첨삭

[이름]nah, t[이름]k you for answering your homework. I think that you are a responsible, organized and a good person inside and out. I want to do the things you do when I get older.

See you later!


-Teacher Shelly- 



Everybody have their own habit as you know I got good ways life style.

>>> Everybody has its own habit, as you know I have a good lifestyle.  (Even though the following indefinite pronouns may seem to have plural meanings, treat them as singular in formal English: anybody, anyone, each, either, everybody, everyone, everything, neither, none, no one, someone, something.\" In an example, she writes, \"everybody who signed up for the ski trip was taking lessons.\")
 First one in the morning when I wake up I drink one spring water bottle.

>>>First thing I do in the morning is drinking a bottle of spring water.
 Which is clean my organ systems.

>>> It cleans my internal organs.

Wherever I go always carry water bottle.

>>> I carry a bottle of water wherever I go.
 Also when I make rice use brown rice instead white rice.

>>> I cook brown rice instead of white rice.
 It is taste not good but my mind always healthy side.
>>> It doesn\'t taste good but I\'m always thinking of my health.

By the way after I eat each meal or snack I use flossing all the time,
>>> I floss every time I finished eating meals or snacks. 

That’s why my teeth still pretty healthy.

>>> That\'s why my teeth are still pretty and healthy.

most people they go to the scaling 2times a year.

>>> Most people do scaling twice a year.
 I do 3 times a year I spend little extra money but it’s worth for me.

>>> I do it three times a year, I spent extra money but it\'s worth it.
 I always watch my eating portion everyday check my weight.

>>> I always watch my eating portion and check my weight every day.
 Everyday I do exercise too.

>>> I do exercise everyday too.

I am strong and healthy.

>>> Correct!


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