What are some ways your best friend has influenced your life in a positive way?

2020-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Whenever I have a time to talk with my friends, I think if it is positive or not. some friends are talking about only politics and fiction which we are not never concerned. whenever they do it, I change the subjects naturally. On the contrary, my friend who was a manager in Carrefour always gave me a positive thought during our high school and college, It made us what we are.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Ethan!

Thank you for sharing your answer regarding the question I sent.
Indeed, we have to consider if things we\'re about to talk to them are positive or not.
It\'s what I usually do as well. 

Anyway, I hope that you will have a good night ahead.
See you tomorrow. ^^

~Teacher Gina


Whenever I have a time to talk with my friends, I think if it is positive or not.
>> CORRECT.
some friends are talking about only politics and fiction which we are not never concerned. 
>> Some friends are talking only  about politics and fiction which we are not or  never of my concern. 
whenever they do it, I change the subjects naturally. 
>> CORRECT.
On the contrary, my friend who was a manager in Carrefour always gave me a positive thought during our high school and college, 
>> On the contrary, my friend who was a manager in Carrefour always gave me a positive thought during our high school and college days. 
It made us what we are.
>> CORRECT.

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