What are the activities for SEOLLAL? What are your plans for that special holiday?ㅓ
학생이 쓴 원문
I guess to experiece tradition game in seoul.
Seoul prepare for us.but I can\'t do it.
I think that maybe if I go to the country,
I\'m not doing anything.I don\'t want this situation
But I have nothing to do.Just only I do to talk grandparents.honstely I felt so bored.
But I think to meet grandparents pleasure
강사 첨삭
Hello JO!
I hope you\'ll have a great time with your grandparents. I\'m sure they are excited to see you!
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I guess to experiece tradition game in seoul.
>> I guess, it is to experience tradition games in Seoul.
Seoul prepare for us.but I can\'t do it.
>> Seoul prepares for us but I can\'t do it.
I think that maybe if I go to the country, I\'m not doing anything.I don\'t want this situation
>> I think that maybe if I go to another country, I will not doing anything. I don\'t want this situation.
But I have nothing to do.Just only I do to talk grandparents.honstely I felt so bored.
>> I have nothing to do. I will just talk to my grandparents. Honestly, I felt so bored.
But I think to meet grandparents pleasure
>> But I think meeting my grandparents is my pleasure.
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