What are the activities that you may enjoy at the park?
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I can enjoy walking in the green environment and sometimes, we can enjoy some events. But actually, I don\'t like to walk. I just walk when I go to shop or restaurant.
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I can enjoy walking in the green environment and sometimes, we can enjoy some events.
>> Correct
OR >> I enjoy walking in the green environment, and on occasion, we can also participate in some events.
But actually, I don\'t like to walk.
>> Correct
I just walk when I go to shop or restaurant.
>> I just walk when I go to a shop or a restaurant.
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