What are the advantages and disadvantages of being a queen?
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The advantages of being a queen is that I can command people to do something. In a kind way of course. I don\'t want to look harsh to my loyal citizens. However, the disadvantages of being a queen is that I seem too royal and grand, according to all the puffy and fancy dress I have to wear. I love neat and plain dresses, not the baloony (puffy) royal gowns which vain people usually wear. So, that is the advantages and disadvantages of being a queen.
P.S. Ms.Lynn, can I change my book? Junior Free Talking is too easy for me so can I change the book to Junior Lower Advance?
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Hello Heather! Good day to you. Thank you for stating your opinion, especially about the advantages and disadvantages of being a queen. Keep up the good work! ~ T. Lyn
The advantages of being a queen is that I can command people to do something.
>>One of the advantages of being a queen is that she can command people to do something for her.
In a kind way of course.
>>Of course, in a kind and polite way.
I don\'t want to look harsh to my loyal citizens.
>>If I\'m a queen, I don\'t want to look and sound harsh to my loyal citizens.
However, the disadvantages of being a queen is that I seem too royal and grand, according to all the puffy and fancy dress I have to wear.
>>However, being a queen has many disadvantages, such as being treated too lavishly and wearing a fluffy, flashy dress that I don\'t like.
I love neat and plain dresses, not the baloony (puffy) royal gowns which vain people usually wear.
>>I like neat, plain dresses, not the loose (fluffy) royal gowns usually worn by frail people.
So, that is the advantages and disadvantages of being a queen
>>Therefore, these are some of the advantages and disadvantages of being a queen.
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