What are the advantages and disadvantages of being rich?
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i think being rich no disadvantages , Instead, you give up happiness or lose health when you become rich. it\'s disadvantages .
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Hi Kyle! Thank you for taking time to do the homework today. Great job! Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
i think being rich no disadvantages , Instead, you give up happiness or lose health when you become rich. it\'s disadvantages .
>> I think there are no disadvantages to being rich. Instead, one may sacrifice happiness or health upon becoming wealthy, which is a disadvantage.
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