What are the advantages and disadvantages of being rich?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that the advantages of being rich is that I have more time because I don\'t have to work. the disadvantages of don\'t having to work is helplessness
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I think that the advantages of being rich is that I have more time because I don\'t have to work. .
>> CORRECT
OR >> I believe that one advantage of being rich is having more free time [이름]ce I don\'t need to work.
the disadvantages of don\'t having to work is helplessness
>> However, the disadvantage of not having to work is feeling helpless.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I believe that one advantage of being rich is having more free time [이름]ce I don\'t need to work.
the disadvantages of don\'t having to work is helplessness
>> However, the disadvantage of not having to work is feeling helpless.
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