What are the advantages and disadvantages of being the oldest sibling?
학생이 쓴 원문
The advantage is I can get a mature treatment and good present on any anniversary. But disadvantage is I have to control my emotions. Because I am a elder sister, so I have to show example and especially I need to control my anger. So this is my disadvantages of being the oldest sibling.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
Wow, I never thought that it\'s part of being an eldest to hide your true emotions. Being a good example to your younger brother is the best thing you could ever make.
~Teacher Erin
The advantage is I can get a mature treatment and good present on any anniversary.
>>The advantage is I can get a mature treatment and a good present on any special occasion.
But disadvantage is I have to control my emotions.
>>But the disadvantage is I have to control my emotions.
Because I am a elder sister,
>>Because I am an elder sister,
so I have to show example and especially I need to control my anger.
>>I have to be a good example, and I need to control my anger.
So this is my disadvantages of being the oldest sibling.
>>So these is the advantage and disadvantages of being the oldest sibling.
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