What are the advantages and disadvantages of both for individuals and companies to shopping online?
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I think if individual person buy to something online, it is simple to get them. They haven\'t advatages in particular.
On the other hands, if companies buy to something online, it will be a large purchase probably. A large purchase usually has a lot of discount benefits and they give to presents for customers.
So, if companies buy to something online, they have advantages.
>> I think if an individual person will buy something online, it is simple to get them. They don\'t get any advantages in particular.
On the other hand, if companies buy something online, they would be large purchases probably. A large purchase usually has a lot of discount benefits and they give presents to the customers.
So, if companies buy something online, they will have advantages.
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