What are the advantages and disadvantages of buying a home?

2018-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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They have both merits and faults in korea. To be specific for the merits, They don`t need to be worry about raising price of home. These days, inflaition rate lags considerably behind home price in korea. Thus After buying a home, You can get a profit by selling that home in the near future. It means that, We consider buying a home as a investment method. But If you're not rich, Most of people who want to buy new homes are using loans from the banks. In case of that, The banks impose high interest rates for users. It lead to make srious problem. Eventhough They get a new homes, They are drowning in debt. By these reasons, Expertise in econmic force the korean to get a only one home to live instesd of investment.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon JM!
Did you already have lunch?

Thanks for sending this homework.

Accomplish your work early today, okay?

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


They have both merits and faults in korea.

>>> They both have merits and demerits in Korea.

To be specific for the merits, They don`t need to be worry about raising price of home.

>>> To be specific, one of the merits is they don\'t need to worry about the increasing price of houses.  

These days, inflaition rate lags considerably behind home price in korea.

>>> These days, inflation rate lags considerably behind house prices in Korea.

Thus After buying a home, You can get a profit by selling that home in the near future.

>>> Thus, after buying a home, you can gain some profit by selling that home in the future.

It means that, We consider buying a home as a investment method. 

>>> It means that we consider buying a house as an investment.

But If you\'re not rich, Most of people who want to buy new homes are using loans from the banks.

>>> But if you\'re not rich, most people who want to buy new homes are getting a loan from banks.

In case of that, The banks impose high interest rates for users. 

>>> In that case, the banks impose high interest rates.
 It lead to make srious problem.

>>> And this result to serious problems.

Eventhough They get a new homes, They are drowning in debt. 

>>> Even though, they have new homes, they are drowning in debt.


By these reasons, Expertise in econmic force the korean to get a only one home to live instesd of investment.

>>> For these reasons, economic experts force Koreans to buy only one house and discourage them to invest in real estate.

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