What are the advantages and disadvantages of buying a new/used car?

2024-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jhozel

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A new car has better condition than used one so I can drive longer mileage and it has trendy design but it\'s expensive than used one. Used car is cheap but it is hard to get newly launched one.

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A new car has better condition than used one so I can drive longer mileage and it has trendy design but it\'s expensive than used one.
>> Correct!
OR: A new car is in better condition than a used car, allowing me to drive for longer distances and having a trendy design, but it is more expensive.
Used car is cheap but it is hard to get newly launched one.
>> Correct!
OR: Used cars are inexpensive, but it is difficult to obtain a newly launched vehicle.

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