What are the advantages and disadvantages of cooking your food at home?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I cook at home, I can become healthy and learn how to cook.
If I am eating out , I can\'t tell whether the amount and taste of the food suit me.
The food will be cooked according to the chef\'s mood.
It could be more than just the right nutrients for me.
So if you eat at home, you can get the right nutrients for me, and the taste is also great for me.
Not only this, but also the ability to cook.
This is not the end of eating, but one way to improve me.
강사 첨삭
If I cook at home, I can become healthy and learn how to cook.
>> CORRECT
If I am eating out , I can\'t tell whether the amount and taste of the food suit me.
>> If I am eating out , I can\'t tell whether the amount and taste of the food would suit me.
The food will be cooked according to the chef\'s mood.
>> CORRECT
It could be more than just the right nutrients for me.
>> It could contain more than just the right nutrients for me.
So if you eat at home, you can get the right nutrients for me, and the taste is also great for me.
>> So if I eat at home, I can get the right nutrients for me, and the taste is also great for me.
Not only this, but also the ability to cook.
>> Not only this, but also have the ability to cook.
This is not the end of eating, but one way to improve me.
>> This is not the end of eating, but one way to improve myself.
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