What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of friends?

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We can’t live without people even though people who want to live alone. People are living that help each other, friends is the most important among others in our life.
>> We can’t live without friends even though people who want to live alone. People are living to help each other, friends are one of the most important people in our life.

 For example if you had faced several big problems and that got out of your control, maybe you want to look for your friends or somebody. Those kind of reason friends are many advantages in our life such as Friends can help you when you are having a hard time, you can drink beer and talk about life, work, and so on with your friends at home or outside.
>> For example, if you are facing several big problems and you got out of your control, maybe you want to look for your friends or someone who could help you. Those kind of situations our friends can help us if you are having a hard time, you can drink beer and talk about life, work, and so on with your friends at home or outside.

 Consequently we can’t live without our social relationship, so we always treat everyone kindly nearby your people.

>> We can’t live without our social relationships, especially with our friends, so we should always treat everyone kindly