What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of siblings?
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There are many advantages and disadvantages of having siblings.
>> There are many advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of siblings.
First of all, if you can hang out with your siblings when you’re bored and want it. Secondly, if you have some problems, siblings will help you and they will take care you. The other way you should often share your things such as clothes, pens, the pocket money(no one knows who steal your grouch bag), desktop computer and so on.
>> First of all, you can hang out with your siblings when you’re bored. Second, if you have some problems, they can help you and they will take care you. You can often share your things such as clothes, pens, the pocket money (no one knows who steal your grouch bag), computer and so on.
Consequently any family don’t exist perfect family and we have to help each siblings because ‘Blood is thicker than water\'.
>>There is no perfect family and we have to help each other because \"Blood is thicker than water\".
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