What are the advantages and disadvantages of installing more automated kiosks in restaurants and sho
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The advantages are first the visitors don`t need to be in a line any more. It makes the user to save time and money. How to save the money in a kisosks is they are offer a discount information autiomatically in partnership with other company services. And Inse some shops are crowded with many custiomers, Some staff have mistaken the order which is differ from the original orders. That means, The machine raise customer satisfactions. However, It cause some problems. First, The olders feel left out following the article. Second, It makes part timers to lost their job. As a owner of shop, It would be a good chance but It deprive part timers of opportunities.
because of economic weakness, I confused which one is better and suitable for the society.
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Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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>>> The main advantage is that customers don\'t need to be in a line anymore.
It makes the user to save time and money.
>>> It helps them save time and money.
How to save the money in a kisosks is they are offer a discount information autiomatically in partnership with other company services.
>>> To save money using kiosks, some company are in partnership with them and they offer discounts in some of their services.
And Inse some shops are crowded with many custiomers, Some staff have mistaken the order which is differ from the original orders.
>>> In addition, some shops are crowded with customers and some staff have mistaken the order which is different from the original orders.
That means, The machine raise customer satisfactions.
>>> That means, the machine raises customers\' satisfaction.
However, It cause some problems.
>>> However, it also has downsides.
First, The olders feel left out following the article.
>>> First, the elderly feel left out following the changes.
Second, It makes part timers to lost their job.
>>> Second, it would cause part timers to lose their job.
As a owner of shop, It would be a good chance but It deprive part timers of opportunities.
>>> As an owner of a shop, it would be a good chance but it deprives part timers of opportunities.
because of economic weakness, I confused which one is better and suitable for the society.
>>> Because of economic crisis, I am confused with which one is better and suitable for the society.
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