What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small house?
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Hello Stella!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
-----------------PLEASE WRITE YOUR HOMEWORK AS AN ESSAY. 숙제를 에세이로 작성하십시오.----------------
advantage
Small houses are easy to clean.
>> An advantage of living in a small house is that it is easy to clean.
A small house helps build relationships.
>> Another is that a small house helps build relationships.
A small house can save money.
>> It can also help save money.
shortcomings
Too many people make a living. You can often bump into each other and fight.
>> A disadvantage is that if a there are a lot of people living in it, they can often bump into each other and fight.
Maybe I\'m the only one who doesn\'t have space.
>> CORRECT!
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