What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small house?

2022-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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advantage 1. Small houses are easy to clean. 2. A small house helps build relationships. 3. A small house can save money. shortcomings 1. Too many people make a living. 2. You can often bump into each other and fight. 3. Maybe I\'m the only one who doesn\'t have space.

강사 첨삭

Hello Stella!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


-----------------PLEASE WRITE YOUR HOMEWORK AS AN ESSAY. 숙제를 에세이로 작성하십시오.----------------


advantage
Small houses are easy to clean.

>> An advantage of living in a small house is that it is easy to clean.
A small house helps build relationships.

>> Another is that a small house helps build relationships.
A small house can save money.

>> It can also help save money.
shortcomings
Too many people make a living. You can often bump into each other and fight.

>> A disadvantage is that if a there are a lot of people living in it, they can often bump into each other and fight.

Maybe I\'m the only one who doesn\'t have space.

>> CORRECT!



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