What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in the countryside?
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When I am in countryside, I feel relaxed. When I drive, I can feel it intensively. There is no traffic-jam. There is a few-cars in a parking lot. I don\'t need to worry to park a car. The price of life also is cheaper than urban area. But, living countryside has disadvantages. One of them is lacking of amenities. There is no big hospital. If I have serious disease, I have to move to urban area. Supermarket also isn\'t in countryside. When I go to the supermarket, I have to buy a large amount of necessaries.
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When I am in countryside, I feel relaxed.
>> When I am in the countryside, I feel relaxed.
When I drive, I can feel it intensively.
>> When I drive, I can feel it intensely.
There is no traffic-jam.
>> There are no traffic jams.
There is a few-cars in a parking lot.
>> There are a few cars in the parking lot.
I don\'t need to worry to park a car.
>> I don\'t need to worry about parking the car.
The price of life also is cheaper than urban area.
>> The cost of living is also cheaper than in urban areas.
But, living countryside has disadvantages.
>> But living in the countryside has disadvantages.
One of them is lacking of amenities. There is no big hospital.
>> One of them is the lack of amenities, such as a big hospital.
If I have serious disease, I have to move to urban area.
>> If I have a serious disease, I have to move to an urban area.
Supermarket also isn\'t in countryside.
>> There are no supermarkets in the countryside either.
When I go to the supermarket, I have to buy a large amount of necessaries.
>> When I go to the supermarket, I have to buy a large amount of necessities.
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