What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in the countryside?
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i think living in the country , Can absorb fresh air and There is green all around, so always feel good , disadvantages is If the hospital is far away, response to an emergency may be slow.
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Hi Kyle! Great job for today! Your answers are getting longer. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
i think living in the country , Can absorb fresh air and There is green all around, so always feel good ,
>>I think living in the country allows you to absorb fresh air and enjoy the greenery all around, so you always feel good.
disadvantages is If the hospital is far away, response to an emergency may be slow.
>> However, a disadvantage is that if the hospital is far away, response to an emergency may be slow.
>>I think living in the country allows you to absorb fresh air and enjoy the greenery all around, so you always feel good.
disadvantages is If the hospital is far away, response to an emergency may be slow.
>> However, a disadvantage is that if the hospital is far away, response to an emergency may be slow.
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