What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing your smartphones?
학생이 쓴 원문
August.1st.2018
Please check your homework below (ANSWER THE QUESTIONS INTO 3-4 SENTENCES)
>>> What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing your smartphones?
Smartphone makes us more closely in the world. However smartphone make us more poor social interaction, people are using smart phone at least 5 hours a day, and people are using app increase. For such a reason they tend to spend more time with their smartphone.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Yeong^^
Please check your corrections below!
Smartphone makes us more closely in the world. However smartphone make us more poor social interaction, people are using smart phone at least 5 hours a day, and people are using app increase. For such a reason they tend to spend more time with their smartphone.
>> Smartphone makes us more closely in the world. However, smartphone make us more less active people are using their smart phone at least 5 hours a day, and they are using a lot of social applications every day. For such a reason they tend to spend more time with their smartphone.
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