What are the advantages and disadvantages of reading on an e-reading device, such as a Kindle or iPa

2020-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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The Kindle has many books available on Amazon. The Kindle is easy to carry with less eye strain. Also, it can read text regardless of the weather. There is no Korean content yet, and if you switch to text, the text is broken. The iPad can enjoy a variety of contents, and anyone can view books by using its function. This is the strength of the tablet PC. I think the Kindle is a good reading books.

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Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the modern devices for reading. Check below for the corrections. Have a good day! ~~T.Dee

The Kindle has many books available on Amazon.

>>CORRECT!
The Kindle is easy to carry with less eye strain. Also, it can read text regardless of the weather.

>>The Kindle is easy to carry and it causes less eye strain. Also, it can allow you to read texts regardless of the weather.
There is no Korean content yet, and if you switch to text, the text is broken.
>>There is no Korean content yet, and if you switch the text to Korean it will appear broken.
The iPad can enjoy a variety of contents, and anyone can view books by using its function.

>>The iPad allows you to enjoy variety of contents and anyone can view books by using its function.
This is the strength of the tablet PC.
>>This is the advantage of a tablet over a PC.
I think the Kindle is a good reading books.

>>I think Kindle is a good device to read books.

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