What are the advantages and disadvantages of receiving an emergency advisory?
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The advantage of receiving an emergency advisory is to let me know the emergency situation.
It is very important to avoid quickly when I meet disasters like earthquake or heavy-rain.
If I couldn\'t get emergency advisory, I will not able to avoid.
But also there are disadvantages. It really annoy me to focus on something.
Everytime I receive an emergency advisory when I am doing my presentation in front of bosses, I feel angry at that time.
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Happy Friday Ian!
I agree that receiving emergency advisories are important however, it can also disturbance at times.
-T. Caitlyn
The advantage of receiving an emergency advisory is to let me know the emergency situation.
>> An advantage of receiving an emergency advisory is that it can let me know about emergency situations.
It is very important to avoid quickly when I meet disasters like earthquake or heavy-rain.
>> It is very important so I can quickly avoid disasters such as earthquakes and heavy rains.
If I couldn\'t get emergency advisory, I will not able to avoid.
If I couldn\'t get emergency advisory, I will not able to avoid.
>> If there is no emergency advisory, I might not be able to avoid such calamities.
But also there are disadvantages. It really annoy me to focus on something.
But also there are disadvantages. It really annoy me to focus on something.
>> But a disadvantage is that I find it annoying whenever I am focusing or doing something.
Everytime I receive an emergency advisory when I am doing my presentation in front of bosses, I feel angry at that time.
Everytime I receive an emergency advisory when I am doing my presentation in front of bosses, I feel angry at that time.
>> I feel very angry every time I receive an emergency advisory while I\'m presenting in front of my bosses.
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