What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting rather than buying?
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If we rent house, we can save money rather than buy house. Also we don\'t have to pay to fix something if something is broken. But, we should move to get another house to live after ending of rent.
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If we rent house, we can save money rather than buy house.
>>> If we rent a house, we can save money rather than buy our own house.
Also we don\'t have to pay to fix something if something is broken.
>>> Also, we don\'t have to pay to fix something that is broken.
But, we should move to get another house to live after ending of rent.
>>> But, we should move to get another house to live in when the contract is finished.
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