What are the advantages and disadvantages of ships and airplanes?
학생이 쓴 원문
The advantages of ships are as below.
1. You can enjoy the view when you are in the ship.
2. There are entertain faciliates which provide a joyful time with your comapny.
The disadvantages of ships are as below.
1. It takes much more time to get your destination compare to the airplane.
2. If you have sea sick, you have to bare the painful time.
The advantages of airplanes are as below.
1. It is the fastest way to get your destination.
2. If you are able to afford the extra, business class and first class will give you very comfortable seats and the best service.
The disadvantages of airplanes are as below.
1. Economy seat is uncomfortable especially if you go far contries.
2. Because of limited space, you need to be more quite than usual and make way for someone next to seat with you.
강사 첨삭
Hi Christine! Happy Monday! Thank you for doing your homework. It is very much appreciated. Keep up the good work. -T. Jasper
Here are your Corrections:
>>Below are the advantages of ships:
>> CORRECT
>> There are entertainment facilities that you can enjoy with your companion.
>> Below are the disadvantages of ships:
>> It takes more time to get to your destination compared to the airplane.
>> If you have seasickness, you have to endure the pain.
>> Below are the advantages of airplanes:
>> It is the fastest way to get to your destination.
>> If you can afford business class and first class tickets, you will be given a comfortable seat and the best services.
>> Below are the disadvantages of airplanes:
>> The economy seat is uncomfortable especially if you are travelling to far countries.
>> Because of the limited space, you need to be more quiet than usual and make way for the person seating next to you.
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