What are the advantages and disadvantages of shopping at a mall?

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Here are my corrections for you:

Most of all, every goods and food is available to check.

>> Every goods and food is available to check.
It is advantages of when shopping at a mall.

>> It is an advantage when shopping at a mall.
Especially when you are buying food, this advantages is very useful.
>> Especially when you are buying food, this advantage is very useful.
But there are some disadvantages of shopping at a mall.

>> But there are some disadvantages in shopping at a mall.
First, it is hard to carry something for a long time like a heavy goods.

>> First, it is hard to carry something for a long time like heavy goods.
And second, usually shopping at a mall need more time than online shopping.

>> Second, usually shopping at a mall needs more time than online shopping.