What are the advantages and disadvantages of shopping at a mall?

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Here are my corrections for you:

First, the advantages are that I don\'t need to wait for delivery and also don\'t pay for the delivery fee.
>> First, the advantages are that I don\'t need to wait for delivery and I also don\'t have to pay for the delivery fee.

The shopping at the mall is more successful because I can see the clothes my directly. 

>> Shopping at the mall is more successful because I can see the clothes directly. 

But the only disadvantage is it\'s limited that I can see in a day.

>> But the only disadvantage is it\'s limited what I can see in a day.