What are the advantages and disadvantages of the popularity of Korean culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
When it comes to nation power about relation with other countries, as Korean culture gets more famous, the soft power is increasingly effective. People in many other countries can easily access to Korea with feeling familiarity, and the possibility of acceptance also will be great. For this reason, the tourism can be invigorated. As a result, it can help development of economy.
However, there are several disadvantages of the popularity of K-culture. The main problem is that China claim that our traditional cultures or foods like hanbok, kimchi and samgeatang belong to them. They speak plainly Korean cultures are originated from Chinese history even through the official media. So, it has dangerous that many people could believe it\'s true. Consequently, they can gain distorted acknowledge. Therefore, I think it is also important to know not just about how much popularity it has but also how it is spread rightly.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Ko [이름].
You are right! K-culture\'s popularity can help in terms of promoting Korean culture which helps make other countries accept them easily and leads to growth of the Korean economy. However, I can also agree with the disadvantages that you\'ve mentioned. It can cause envy from other countries and can start claims about certain things.
-T. Caitlyn
When it comes to nation power about relation with other countries, as Korean culture gets more famous, the soft power is increasingly effective.
>> When it comes to national power in relation to other countries, as Korean culture gets more famous, the soft power is increasingly effective.
People in many other countries can easily access to Korea with feeling familiarity, and the possibility of acceptance also will be great.
>> People in many other countries can easily access Korea with a feeling of familiarity, and the possibility of acceptance will also be great.
For this reason, the tourism can be invigorated.
>> For this reason, tourism can be invigorated.
As a result, it can help development of economy.
>> As a result, it can help the development of the economy.
However, there are several disadvantages of the popularity of K-culture.
However, there are several disadvantages of the popularity of K-culture.
>> However, there are several disadvantages to the popularity of K-culture.
The main problem is that China claim that our traditional cultures or foods like hanbok, kimchi and samgeatang belong to them.
>> The main problem is that China claims that our traditional cultures or foods like hanbok, kimchi, and samgyetang belong to them.
They speak plainly Korean cultures are originated from Chinese history even through the official media.
>> They plainly state that Korean culture originated from Chinese history, even through official media.
So, it has dangerous that many people could believe it\'s true.
>> So, it is dangerous because many people might believe it\'s true.
Consequently, they can gain distorted acknowledge.
>> Consequently, they can gain distorted knowledge.
Therefore, I think it is also important to know not just about how much popularity it has but also how it is spread rightly.
>> CORRECT
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