What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling alone?
학생이 쓴 원문
One of advantages of traveling alone is surely the freedom.
I can do what I want to do or go, and also I don\'t need to do what I don\'t want to do.
And I don\'t need to care of my mates. During the treveling trip, their physical conditions and personalities are defferent.
But I think traveling alone have more disadvantages.
A lot of attraction are more kind for numerous people than alone.
For example, It is hard to have fine dining in famous restaurants.
So thesedays, there are good ways to get temporary crew for tour by social apps, and it would be much better to enjoy traveling.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Ian!
There are indeed advantages and disadvantages and maybe, we can look at the purpose of our travel. If it\'s for self-reflection, then traveling alone would be better. However, if it\'s to have fun or socialize, I think being in a group can help you achieve this purpose.
- T. Caitlyn
One of advantages of traveling alone is surely the freedom.
>> One of the advantages of traveling alone is surely freedom.
I can do what I want to do or go, and also I don\'t need to do what I don\'t want to do.
I can do what I want to do or go, and also I don\'t need to do what I don\'t want to do.
>> I can do what I want to do or go where I want to.
And I don\'t need to care of my mates. During the treveling trip, their physical conditions and personalities are defferent.
>> Also, I don\'t need to care about others while traveling because most of the time, our physical conditions and personalities are different.
But I think traveling alone have more disadvantages.
>> But I think traveling alone has more disadvantages.
A lot of attraction are more kind for numerous people than alone.
A lot of attraction are more kind for numerous people than alone.
>> A lot of attractions are in favor of numerous people than those alone.
For example, It is hard to have fine dining in famous restaurants.
For example, It is hard to have fine dining in famous restaurants.
>> CORRECT
So thesedays, there are good ways to get temporary crew for tour by social apps, and it would be much better to enjoy traveling.
So thesedays, there are good ways to get temporary crew for tour by social apps, and it would be much better to enjoy traveling.
>> So these days, there are good ways to get a temporary crew for tours through social applications and it could make your travel better and more enjoyable.
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