What are the advantages and disadvantages of using cosmetics?
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The advantage of using cosmetics is that It makes you look young. And the disadvantage is that It takes up time.
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Hi, [이름].
Thank you again for doing your homework. I agree that putting on makeup is a bit time-consuming especially if you are not used to it.
-T. Caitlyn
The advantage of using cosmetics is that It makes you look young. And the disadvantage is that It takes up time.
>> An advantage of using cosmetics is that it makes you look younger while its disadvantage is that it\'s time-consuming.
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