What are the advantages and disadvantages of using sticky notes?
학생이 쓴 원문
i think using sticky notes are many advantages.
first, can using able many simply notes.
can easy attach to notebook, attach to computer monitor and attach to desk. and easy remove.
second advantage is sticky notes are colorful so beautiful.
so important information save.
but sticky notes are many disadvantages too.
first disadvantage is able to lost easily.
while long time using, adhesive can lost attach power.
so easy fall and lost anywhere.
second, if using many sticky notes, feel able to dizzy.
so using moderate better than many use sticky notes.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
You are right! There are a lot of advantages to using sticky notes, especially if you want to take note of something simple like a reminder. However, you are also correct that they easily get lost or misplaced. Actually, for me, I use sticky notes on my computer during class because I find it more convenient than the paper ones, since I can save them on my computer.
- T. Caitlyn
i think using sticky notes are many advantages.
>> I think using sticky notes has many advantages.
first, can using able many simply notes.
first, can using able many simply notes.
>> First, you can use them for many simple notes.
can easy attach to notebook, attach to computer monitor and attach to desk. and easy remove.
can easy attach to notebook, attach to computer monitor and attach to desk. and easy remove.
>> They can easily be attached to a notebook, computer monitor, or desk, and are easy to remove.
second advantage is sticky notes are colorful so beautiful.
second advantage is sticky notes are colorful so beautiful.
>> Second, sticky notes are colorful, so they are beautiful.
so important information save.
so important information save.
>> So important information can be saved.
but sticky notes are many disadvantages too.
but sticky notes are many disadvantages too.
>> But sticky notes also have many disadvantages.
first disadvantage is able to lost easily.
first disadvantage is able to lost easily.
>> First, they can be easily lost.
while long time using, adhesive can lost attach power.
while long time using, adhesive can lost attach power.
>> Over time, the adhesive can lose its sticking power.
so easy fall and lost anywhere.
so easy fall and lost anywhere.
>> So it can easily fall and be lost anywhere.
second, if using many sticky notes, feel able to dizzy.
second, if using many sticky notes, feel able to dizzy.
>> Second, if you use too many sticky notes, it can make you feel dizzy.
so using moderate better than many use sticky notes.
so using moderate better than many use sticky notes.
>> So using a moderate amount is better than using too many sticky notes.
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