What are the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV?

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Watching too much television is not good for your concentration and health. Especially when young children are watching television, have bad eye sight and television makes young children action foolish. Excessive TV watching can also contribute to sleep difficulties, behavior problem, lower growth, and other health issues.

>> Watching too much television is not good for our concentration and health. Especially when young children are watching television, it might result to have a bad eyesight in the future and it makes young children their actions foolish. The excessive watching TV can also help us to sleep, behavior, problem, lower growth, and other health issues.